Comments on: FINAL ESSAY http://www.netsua.com/blog/final-essay Everyone's favorite person - only backwards Sun, 07 Sep 2008 23:21:49 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.1 By: Austen S. http://www.netsua.com/blog/final-essay#comment-14 Austen S. Tue, 25 Jan 2005 00:47:00 +0000 http://netsua.com/?p=26#comment-14 Yes, I thought that to, but the essay needed to have a paragraph that overviews the chapter for each one. (of couse, THE EDITOR (my mom) was the one who suggested (or made me make) the change. Also, yes, I do have a page with my sources. I'll post it now....... Yes, I thought that to, but the essay needed to have a paragraph that overviews the chapter for each one. (of couse, THE EDITOR (my mom) was the one who suggested (or made me make) the change.

Also, yes, I do have a page with my sources. I’ll post it now…….

]]> By: Baritone Bob http://www.netsua.com/blog/final-essay#comment-13 Baritone Bob Mon, 24 Jan 2005 22:42:00 +0000 http://netsua.com/?p=26#comment-13 Nice job Austen...I like the vivid and colorful descriptions. You tell a dramatic story. You might consider omitting or changing the first paragraph in part V....I think it gives away too much, and its not clear until later in that part V that you are referring to the same incident. Also, have you written up your reference list? It would be interesting to see your sources, and give the reader information for 'further reading'. Uncle Bob Nice job Austen…I like the vivid and colorful descriptions. You tell a dramatic story. You might consider omitting or changing the first paragraph in part V….I think it gives away too much, and its not clear until later in that part V that you are referring to the same incident.

Also, have you written up your reference list? It would be interesting to see your sources, and give the reader information for ‘further reading’.

Uncle Bob

]]> By: Max Reed http://www.netsua.com/blog/final-essay#comment-12 Max Reed Sat, 22 Jan 2005 14:52:00 +0000 http://netsua.com/?p=26#comment-12 What an excellet piece, Austen! You did a lot of research, and you put it all together very nicely. I enjoyed reading it. Let us know your grade on it. I hope you will continue to post on this blog. I look at it nearly every morning to see if you've added anything. If you write something every day or so, we'll be able to keep up with all the stuff you are doing. Love, Grandma What an excellet piece, Austen! You did a lot of research, and you put it all together very nicely. I enjoyed reading it. Let us know your grade on it.

I hope you will continue to post on this blog. I look at it nearly every morning to see if you’ve added anything. If you write something every day or so, we’ll be able to keep up with all the stuff you are doing.

Love, Grandma

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